ok so liveswif is working again and I got to the firs chorus but I'm kinda stuck on my fan fic thing

so well here's something for you sonic fans out there

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and something for invader zim fans

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and something for inuyasha fans

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lol never gets old^^

anyways here's a pic I drew and I didn't use pant shop on it

sibling rivalries rad sx style :)

Patster:Power Gareton?
Power and Gareton:Patster?
*Run up to each other*
Power:Long time no see dude.
Gareton:Yeah.
Patster:It's been a while.
Patster:Oh Rafiell sorry about DJ dude.........
Rafiell:.............
Rafiell:*Sigh*
DJ:.............
DJ:*Snore*
Rafiell:!
DJ:*Snore*
Rafiell:- -'
*Punch!*
DJ:OW!!!!!!
DJ:What'dja do that for?
Rafiell:I thought you were dead geez your as bad as Miroku's drunk sensie.
DJ:But I'm not drunk..........
*Punch!*
DJ:OW!!!!!!!!!
DJ:Why do you keep punching me!?
Rafiell:Because your an idiot I though you were dead and who sleeps during battle anyways!?!?!!?
DJ:If it wasn't for me you wouldn't of won I used my fire sole technique to weaken him!
Rafiell:Not untill after we all fought him!
DJ:Well he choked me I was trying to recover!
Rafiell:Shut up!
DJ:You shut up!
Rafiell:Why don't you make me?
DJ:Is that a challenge?
Rafiell:Bring it wimp!
DJ:Wha'd you say?
Rafiell:You heard me wimp!
DJ:Let's take this out side!
Rafiell:We are outside!
DJ:Er um you know what I mean!
Rafiell:Heh.....
*Rafiell gets up steps backwards and DJ gets up (by now every one is staring at them)*
DJ:Let's go if you think you can beat me!
Rafiell:Same to you!
DJ:RAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!
*DJ transforms into hyper DJ*
Rafiell:RAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!
*Rafiell transforms into hyper Rafiell*
*Rafiell and DJ fly up into the sky and start fighting*
Darkness:Geez when they fight they go all out!
Silver:Shouldn't we stop them?
Lee:Not a good Idea the last 2 people who tried yo stop them almost got murdered it's best just to let them work it out.
Ncs:Who were the last 2 people to try to stop them?
Pryo and Lee:.................That's not the point.................

*Meanwhile*
Rafiell:HA!
Rafiell:Don't tell me that's all you got little bro!
DJ:Heh I'm just geting started!

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here's hyper rafiell and dj

And the winners are...............

Darkness:So what are we waiting for lets go?!
Rafiell:*thinking*DJ.......*thinking*
Rafiell:GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
*Rafiell rushes tword metreo*
Rafiell:VOLCANIC RAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Metreo:AGGGGGGGGGHHHHH!!!!!!!!
Metreo:HYPER-
Darkness and Ncs:CHAOS LANCE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Metreo:AAAAAAAAGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
-?-:ROCK BLAST!!!!!
-??-:HYDRO CANNON!!!!!!!!!!
Metreo:AAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Scorch:MYSTIC PURGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Metreo:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGG GGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!
*Metreo goes flying*
Ncs:So who are you guys?
Power:I'm Power the elephant.
Gareton:And I'm Gareton the rhino.
Darkness:A green elephant and a gold and silver rhino wow.....
Rafiell:Is it over?
Scorch:No..........
Metreo:Heh you guys are stronger than I thought but I'll still win!
Ncs:After we all attacked him he doesn't even have a limp.
Metreo:Heh Hyper- wha?
Metreo:M-my powers are growing weaker what's happening?
Rafiell:*thinking*now's my chance!*thinking*
*Rafiell rushes tword metreo*
Rafiell:THIS IS FOR WHAT YOU DID TO DJ!!!!!!!!!!!
Rafiell:INFERNO BLAST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Metreo:AGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!

*Meahnwhile*
*Kento changes back into his big form*
Kento:Lla ta ecno!
Kento:Ko?
Jason:He said all at once.....
Every one:OK!
Blade:WIND SPEARS!!!!
Axe and Silver:CHAOS SPEAR!!!!!
Jason:DEADLY NIGHT SHADE!!!!!!!!
Kento:GNIEZALB ONREFNI!!!!!!!!!
Patster:FIRE TORNADO!!!!!!!
Nick:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

*Meanwhile*
Flame:EXPLODING INFERNO!!!!!!!!
Pryo:PYRO BURST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Zap:STATIC PULSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vonage:ELEMENT BLAST!!!!!!!!!!
Julia:LIGHT SPEAR!!!!!!!!!!!
*vince changes into his big form*
Vince:(electric charge)
Lee:FLAMING ROCKS!!!!!!!!
-?-:PSY BLAST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Zane:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGG GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lee:RJ glad ya showed up.

*Meanwhile*
Sonic and Shadow:CHAOS BLAST!!!!!!!!!
Ice:FROZEN FURRY!!!!
Wolf:FIRE RAM!!!!!!!
(P)Bolts:PIKACCCHHHHHHHHUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUU!!!!!!!!!
*Rain changes into his big form*
Rain:HYPER BLAST!!!!!!!!!!!!
Gail:AAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHH HHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*Meahnwhile*
*A giant dragon comes and picks up the black scythe and metreo*
Scorch:Demon ryu?
Demon ryu:Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr......
Eggman:These guys will be a fine addition to my team!
*They fly off*
*Every one turns back to normal exept rj and scorch powers down to super*
Rafiell:DJ.......
Rafiell:DJ...........
Rafiell:*Sob*
Pryo:Rafiell.......
Rafiell:Leve me alone!
Pryo:..........
Pryo:*thinking*DJ.........*thinking*

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here's a pic of rj and patsterthehedgehog's characters power and gariton

ok I haven't checked to see if liveswif was working yet and I probably can't for a while but seriosly don't tell me to switch to flash 8 because I use it at school and don't get me wrong I like the effects and some of the cool stuff but it crashed like 50 times a day and the preview went from like 2fps back to 12fps and I'm not paying 800 bucks for that anyways:

the black scythe 5

Gail:It's been a while ice.
Ice:Yeah like I care what you think.
Gail:Who are the others?
Shadow:I'm Shadow,Shadow the hedgehog the ultement life form created 50 years ago by the great Dr gerild robotnic and the alien who talks too much black doom.
*Sonic comes up and puts his elbow on shadow's shoulder*
Sonic:You always have to make a grand entrance don't you shad?
Shadow:Get off of me...........
Sonic:I'm sonic.
Wolf:Heh and I'm Wolf.
Gail:But your a rabbit........
Wolf:Oh never mind............
Gail:Well what are you waiting for ice I'm right here.
Ice:DEEP FREEZE!!!!!!!!!!!
Gail:Electric sword swipe!
Ice:AAAGGGHHHH!!!!
*Sonic and shadow go super*
Sonic:Hey we didn't need the emeralds!
Shadow:Isn't that patster?
Sonic:Patster I told you to stay back!
Patster:Heh....
*Throws up an emerald and catches it *
Sonic:Was that emerald black!?!?!
Shadow:It doesn't matter we have a battle to fight!
Shadow:CHAOS CONTROL!!!!
Gail:What?!!?
Shadow:Over here!
Shadow:CHAOS..................SPEAR!!!
!!!!
Gail:AGGGGHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Gail:STATIC PULSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shadow:AAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG HHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
Sonic:WHITE GEM HOMEING SMASH!!!!!
Gail:AGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!
Sonic:CHAOS SPEAR!!!!!!!
Gail:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGG GGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!
Gail:Electro beam!
Sonic:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGG GGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Wolf:FIRE BALL!!!!!!!!
Gail:Lightning bolt!
Wolf:AAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH H!!!!!!!!!!!
Gail:A waste of my time.
Ice:Heh we can't be beaten that easly!
Sonic:Yeah!
-?-:Pika!
Shadow:Ok seriosly do we even need to put the -?- up after that one word we all know who it is seriosly.
Wolf:Bolts?
Wolf:What's up with the muse?(for those of you that have played jak and daxter and the precursor legacy yes the same thing)
Rain:Hey my name's rain.
(P)Bolts:Pi pika chu!
Every one:..............
Patster yelling from 30 feet away:HE SAID LETS GO!
Every one:Oh...............

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this is what flame ice blade zap rain and gail look like

well liveswif's being gay again and won't stop skipping so I can't see if it's syncing right or not so that's another delay on when my flash comes out well anyways some of you might of heard about this flash series I'm gonna make in about a year called rad comix and since there's not much else goin on I might as well say some stuff about it, before I get to it there's gonna be a sort of mini series about it talkin about scorch metreo flame ice blade zap and them and the great battle(yes the same one I mentioned in 51 or something) so the first one's gonna be called r.a.d. f.b.1 scorch pt 1 metreo's curse and since I make comics of these before hand and I randomly took a pic of it for no reason here's a scene from it and here's what's happening:
Metreo's holding(protecting) scorch while jumping through a wall of black fire(dark magic) and yes metreo is evil you'll just have to wait to see why he's saving scorch instead of fighting him^^ here's the real pic(left) and here's it drawn on paint(right):

the black scythe 5

Zane:Well what are you waiting for flame?
Flame:Shut up.....
Zane:You scared you can't beat me like allways?
Flame:Shut up!
Zane:Wimp!
Flame:I SAID SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!
*Flame rushed tword Zane*
Zane:Mystic purge!
Flame:AGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
Zap:Whoa Flame you ok bro?
Flame:I'm fine!
-?-:Whoa whats going on here?
Vonage:Lee what are you doin here?
Lee:Looks like a bunch of battles are goin on here.
Pryo:Yeah.
Flame:Come on guys Zane's not gonna defeat himself!
Lee:Geez......
Lee:Might as well power up.
*lee takes off his jacket and his dragon shaped birthmark starts glowing*
Lee:Grrrrrrrrrrr.......
*Lee's shirt starts to buldge and slightly tears*
Lee:GGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!
*Lee's shirt bulges alot as if wings were underneath and tears alot and his 6 head spines turn into 2 silver style ones*
Lee:RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Lee's shirt gets torn off revealing his dragon shaped birth mark and 2 large wings*
Vonage:Ok lets go!
Lee:Am I the only one with a super transformation wow.
Flame:White flame shot!
Zane:HA dark magic crush!
Flame:AGGGGHHHH!!!!!
Pryo:Pyro BLAST!!!!!!!
Zane:UGH!
Zane:Why you.....
Zane:Shadow burage!
Pryo:AGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vonage:ELEMENT RAM!
Zane:AGH!
Zane:TAKE DOWN!
*Zane grabs vonage's arm and spins side ways 3 times and slams him into the ground*
Vonage:AGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Lee rushes tword zane*
Lee:RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!
*Zane takes out his staff and jams it into lee's gut*
Lee:Agh..................
*Falls down*
Zap:Electro sphere!
Zane:Demonic ray!
Zap:AGH!
Zane:Pathetic!
Flame:this isn't over!
-?-:Got that right!
Vonage:Julia?
Julia:yup!
Lee:And vince hey dude.
Vince:^^
Lee:What he's a mute....

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the black scythe 4

Blade:Silver, Axe, Jason watch out nick is very powerful.
Axe:Doesn't look that strong to me.
Nick:How bout you say that to my nunchucks!
Axe:Bring it!
*Axe transforms into Hyper Axe*
Silver:Very well!
*Transforms into super silver*
Jason:Humph
*Jason transforms into a full shadow giant wolf*
Blade:Lets go!
Nick:Bring it!
Blade:BURINIG WIND!
Nick:AGH!
Nick:WATER BLADE!!!!!
Blade:AGH!
Jason:DEADLY NIGHT SHADE!!!
Nick:AGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!
Nick:*Cough*HYDRO BIND!!!!!!!!
Jason:AAAAAAGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!!!!
Nick:Hey weren't there 4 of you?
Axe:Over here!
Axe:CHAOS.......BLAST!!!!!
Nick:AAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHH HHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!11
Nick:*Pant**Pant*MOLTEN AQUA!!!!!!
Axe:AAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
!!!!!!
Silver:Try me.
Nick:Very well NUNCHUCK SAW BLADES!!!!!!!!
Silver:SHILED OF LIGHT!!!!!!!
Nick:WATER BOMB!!!!
*Breaks sheild*
SilverAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nick:This all you got?
Blade:Heh were just getting started!
Axe:YEAH!
Silver:Heh!
Jason:Still tied up here......
Jason:Wait a minuet is that?
Patster:Hey guys miss me?
Silver:Patster?
Patster:Hey!
Axe:What's with the giant kitsune?
*the kitsune grows smaller(normal form)*
Kento:M'I otneK.
Axe:What?
Kento:I dias m'I otneK.
Axe:Speak english.
Kento:I ma.
Axe:*Sigh*
Kento:Tahw?
Kento:Dnim reven.........
*Kento transforms back into his super form*
Kento:Era ew tsuj annog dnats ereh lla yad?
Kento:Stel og!
Axe and silver:........
Jason:Lets just get back to the battle.
Jason:CAN SOME ONE FREAKIN UNTIE ME ALREADY?

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here's jason's normal form kento's normal form and nick

50 wow now if only I could finish flashes as fast as this............
the black scythe 3

Scorch:Guys you don't want to end up like DJ did were extreamly strong.
Ncs:Are you referring to us?
Scorch:No me metreo and the black scythe.
Ncs:You calling me weak?!
Scorch:No.
Scorch:Your not one of the ancient ones.
Darkness:Ancient ones?
Scorch:Yes that great battle I mentioned took place 5 trillion and 18 years ago.
Ncs:That would mean you would be 5 trillion years old.
Scorch:Right my physical age remains 18.
Darkness:Then why aren't you dead?
Scorch:The only way I could win and save Zike is by using a curse.
Scorch:I sent the black scythe metreo demon ryu and myself to the netherlands.
Ncs:Humph I still say I'm stronger than you.
Scorch:Oh yeah?
*Reverts back to normal*
Scorch:See that mountain?
Ncs:Yeah.
*Scorch waves his hand in front of it(it's about 2 miles away)*
Ncs:And?
*The mountain grumbles to the ground*
Scorch:Can you do that?
Ncs:Yeah.
Scorch:Then why don't ya?
Ncs:You destroyed the only mountain around here.
*scorch powers up*
Scorch:Never mind lets go!
Rafiell:Finally!
Metreo:Geez you guys talk forever I'll get rid of that problem.
*they rush tword eachother*

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the black scythe 2

Scorch:Grrrrrrrrrrrr.........
Ncs:.........
Scorch:RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Scorch's body turns blue and his eyes fade out and turn red*
Ncs:What?
Scorch:Heh you just gonna stand there?
Ncs:Don't slow me down.
Darkness:Yeah so we have to sit here?
Rafiell:Well I guess you can stand but siting's more comfortable.
Darkness:Why do they get all the fun their so gonna beat him.
DJ:Trust me no their not.

*15 minuet later*
Scorch:PSY ELECTRO KICK!
Ncs:CHAOS BEAM!
Metreo:AAAGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
!
*Metreo flies backwards and crashes*
DJ:I can finish him off now!
*Runs tword Metreo*
Scorch:WAIT DJ DON'T!
DJ:FIRE-what?
Metreo:Heh.......
*Metreo stands up and chokes DJ*
DJ:*Cough**Cough*
Metreo:You fool.......
DJ:*Cough**Cough*F-f......i.......r...
..e.........s-s.....o......l.........e
Metreo:Begone with you.
*Metreo throws DJ and he lands close to the others(Scorch's team)*
Rafiell:DJ!
Rafiell:DJ wake up DJ DJ..............
DJ:............
Rafiell:GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!
!
*Rafiell glows with energy*
Rafiell:GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!
Rafiell:I'll kill you!
Rafiell:RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ncs:........
Darkness:Heh finally some action......
Darkness:DARKSPINE TRIGGER!!!!!!!
*Darkness turns into Darkspine Darkness*
*Rafiell stops glowing and he's hyper rafiell*
Rafiell:Lets go!

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ok after 15 hours I'm finally wide awake and I can work on my flash^^I just have to make sure I don't make the same mistake I did swan working from 4am to 12pm striate fueled only by mountain lightning and hot n' spicy bowl noodle soup dang my hands hurt when I got back to school and for some stupid reason I drew at school too^^'yeah and just cuz I'll be working on my flash doesn't mean I'm staying off ng for a while heck I'll be here just as often.......
ok seriosly if you have a problem with liveswif just ask me those forums and stuff are like weird n stuff............anyways I guess I'll get back to work again so here's another part from it did I draw them right?